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Time to publish my #flashfiction for the WEP Life is Beautiful challenge.
POST April 19 - 21
Here I offer one of my few forays into #fantasy. Written many moons ago, I think it encapsulates the theme.
Enjoy my story. Click on names in my sidebar to read more.
The Reunion
Charlotte scarcely remembered the long bus ride from Sydney through
the rugged countryside, so focused was she on seeing Jack again.
‘We’re here.’ The driver pulled his lumbering vehicle to the side
of the road. ‘You’re being met?’
‘Yes.’ Charlotte slashed her lips with the bright red shade Jack
loved.
Slinging her black tote over her shoulder, she walked carefully down
the aisle and thanked the driver who helped her alight.
‘Are you sure about this?’ he asked. ‘People who wander into the Australian
bush, often never wander out again.’
Charlotte was the happiest she’d been for years. Her heart thumped
in her ears when she said, ‘I’ll be fine.’
The driver’s eyes roved the empty road. ‘No luggage then, love?’
‘Not this trip.’
‘There’s no one here to meet you.’
‘He’ll come.’
‘But who? The houses were bulldozed years ago.’
Charlotte smiled, turned away, slipped a pill under her tongue.
‘Thanks for bringing me so far out of your way, young man.’ She handed him a
tiny red rose from the posy she carried.
He twirled the flower. ‘I’ll come back. One? Two hours?’
‘Thanks, but no. Be on your way now.’
‘I really don’t mind.’
‘It’s fine.’ Charlotte walked away, tugging her bright red coat
around her shoulders. She was relieved when the bus’s engine ticked over.
~*~
It was hard going on a track that was no longer maintained, but
she made it to Gulliriviere, the tiny settlement where she once lived with Jack
and their friends. It’d been named by Irish ex-convicts who were used to
plentiful rains in their home country. How flummoxed they were by a river that
bore nothing but gravel year after bitter year.
Leaving the abandoned shacks behind, further into the bush she
trudged. Her steps slowed as she put distance between her and the desolation of
the little street where houses were sacrificed for a lumber mill that was never
built.
Logging.
Controversial even then.
The ‘greenies’ had chained themselves to the trees and no one
could budge them.
As she passed by, the eucalyptus trees rustled their arms in
salute.
Home.
But home had left. Only the scraggly beauty of nature remained.
Where once their cabin stood smugly, framed by the white picket fence Jack
built and the fragrant flowers she planted, there was … nothing.
‘Jack,’ she whispered, ‘there’s no clue we ever lived here … Oh …
but I’m wrong. Look!’
Charlotte creaked to her knees in front of her tatty rose bush, surviving
after all these years. She tugged out weedy grasses, revealed tiny closed buds,
then inhaled the earthy smell. ‘Not everything’s gone, darling Jack.’ She lay
the posy beside the rose bush, memories rushing through her head.
She recalled her twenty-three-year old self following her love to
his rough-hewn shack in the Outback, two hours’ drive to the nearest
town and a light plane trip to Sydney. She loved the koalas who lived in the
trees nearby, she loved the solitude and yes, she even loved the big red
kangaroos who nibbled the green shoots in her garden, looking cheekily at her
over their shoulders as they loped away.
She’d set her easel amongst the trees and paint miniatue bush
flora until the sun set on the faraway horizon. Her paintings would continue to hang in art
galleries in Australia and the Musée du Quai Branly in Paris long after she was
gone.
Living in the bush had been good.
Leaving it had not.
After their cabin had been razed to the ground, they’d relocated
to Byron Bay. Plenty of flora for her to paint, but Jack had to fly in/fly out
to continue his work on the western Droughtmaster grazing property.
‘Hello, Madam Charlie,’ Jack would greet her at the airport.
Tossing his duffle bag in the trunk, he’d hurry to the passenger door, wrench
it open. ‘Come here,’ he’d growl, kissing her over and over much to the delight
of the traffic inspector.
Their only argument was over his retirement.
‘No, Charlotte, I won’t retire. I’m only sixty-five. Our
experiment with the new Droughtmaster breed is ongoing. Perhaps when it’s done
…’
~*~
Midnight.
Phone call.
Frank Mangin, Jack’s co-worker.
‘I’m sorry, Mrs Sandilands ... Jack’s gone ... heart attack.’
The bed caught her as she fell.
‘We were working in the study.’
Garbled noises from her mouth.
Clunk! The phone hit the floor; Frank yabbered on.
‘Mrs Sandilands? I’m calling someone.’
‘No!’ No one could put her back together.
‘Mrs Sandilands! Jack had a message for you. He said, and I wrote
it down—um—When it’s time, tell Charlie to come to the shack.’
‘Are you sure?’
‘Yes. I know your home at Gulliriviere is long gone. But that’s
the message.’
‘Thanks, Frank.'
If Jack wanted her at the shack, to the shack she would go …
~*~
Still kneeling at the rose bush in front of the shack’s
foundations, she took the gold fob watch from its pouch and let it drop into
her palm. She’d bought it years ago to give to Jack when he retired. It was a
work of great artistry, with minute patterns painstakingly etched into every
chain link. She read the inscription:
To Jack, my wild Colonial Boy!
Yours ever, Charlie. XX
She brought it to her lips, kissed it.
The first pain hit.
It's time.
~*~
The rose bush bloomed with blood-red roses. The fragrance
enveloped her as it mingled with sweet summer smells.
‘Charlie!’
With the sweet fragrance of roses whirling around her, she ran
through the tall grasses, trailing her fingers over the white, silky flowers.
He’d be waiting by the creek just ahead, beyond the grey houses.
She hesitated at the stand of weeping willows, their lush tendrils
like dishevelled hair as they caressed the surface of the water.
Then she saw him—her Jack—running through the willows, pushing
aside the graceful drapery. He hurried toward her—arms outstretched—welcoming
her home.
She beckoned her love.
They gazed into each other’s light-kissed eyes, marvelled at their
sun-painted limbs, overjoyed at their reunion. He took the fob
watch from her soft, smooth hand, then they strolled away hand in hand across
the sparkling water, fading from sight in a gentle swirl of silvery mist.
Life is beautiful, Charlotte mused.
TAGLINE
– Life is beautiful, but death can be even better.
©DeniseCCovey2016
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