It's the final WEP for 2019. It's been a great year and we've seen some great writing. Hoping there's some time in your hectic holiday or work schedule to do the rounds and read some pleasurable writing. Thanks to the team - Nilanjana Bose, Olga Godim and L.G. Keltner who've helped provide strength and purpose.
Here's my fun contribution to the December challenge.
On Top of the Mountain
On
top of the mountain was where Ciara longed to be—leaving behind all her
insecurities, her unhappiness, her confusion over the breakup with Tod. That was
why in her backpack she’d tucked her special passport to tackle the road from
France to Spain. The Camino de Santiago. She was following in the footprints of
2.5 million pilgrims who every year attempted to walk the 800 kilometre (497
miles). Each morning, she flew out of bed like a bird. Then for hours on end - trudge,
trudge, trudge.
Whoever
thought there’d be so many mountains, hills and valleys, especially at the
beginning of the walk when most people were flabbily unfit? Her group all
prodded their walking poles into the muddy ground, following the footprints of
those in the lead. They took every opportunity to leave a token on every statue
and shrine they passed, carefully placed rocks they’d brought from home and
dropped them at the feet of saints like they were dropping their burdens. Of
course they had to snap photograph after photograph on their smart phones, before
whining and flopping beside the road, fanning themselves, pouring bottled water
over their faces, until the guide finally called them out.
‘If
you keep lagging, we’ll be camping beside the road in the rain instead of
enjoying a drink, a nice hot bath and a comfy bed at the inn.’
That
did the trick. Even Ciara smartened up her act.
The
climb up this latest mountain had been hard in the drizzle, but Ciara had to
admit, the view, or what she could see of it between the clouds, was Paradise.
She
twirled round and round like the ballerina she was, fantasizing she was lead ballerina
in Swan Lake, which she wasn't, then fell into a dizzy heap, like she was the frumpy ugly
duckling everyone shunned.
‘Woops!’
She giggled, brushing off twigs and leaves, lying on her back, bathed in grey-blue
sky. ‘Look on the bright side, girl!’
She
was first.
She never got
to be first.
She
wasn’t even first with Tod. He’d chosen her because she looked like his first
girlfriend. Ugh. That sure made her feel like the ugly duckling.
But
today, despite Tod, was an important milestone in her life.
Her
confusion was lifting like clouds on the mountain. Yes! She thumped the ground
with her two fists. She came on this journey of self-discovery and she was self-discovering.
Awesome. At thirty-four that wasn’t bad. Feeling smug, she sat up and leaned
against the one and only scrappy tree and guzzled from her water bottle.
Now
that her fitness had improved, she’d hurried ahead even though it was not the done
thing. Truthfully, she was sick of the groups’ collective whining. Sure, the climb
today had tested their fitness, but what did they expect? They were crossing
the Pyrenees. All the way from St Jean Pied de Port in France to this
splendid mountain range in Spain and then some. What a pilgrimage. What a way
to start over. And it’d all be over in a month.
It
was Roderick who riled her. There was always one. A pain from the beginning, whining
about everything—the food, the weather, the lack of bottled water. He even
complained when at one of the villages a kindly wine merchant provided red wine
through one of the water taps, his contribution to the pilgrim walk. It’d helped
them feel no pain through the rest of the day.
Still
umpteen kilometres to go til they reached Santiago de Compostela. Could she put
up with him that long?
She
was surprised their guide, Rafe, hadn’t sent him packing. Ah Rafe. She
pictured his built body, muscled by years of climbing, and his piercing blue
eyes, always focused on the beautiful landscape, never on her even though she
did her best to attract him with her tight tops and lycra pants. She and
Andrea, the other Brit, tried to outdo each other, rising earlier than everyone
to hog the bathroom to apply their makeup. But Rafe was immune. She felt like stabbing him with her eyeliner when she caught him looking lovesick every time he glanced
at Matthew, the royal marine from the U.S. Hot damn.
She
dropped her water bottle beside the dozens of others abandoned by naughty
walkers who’d never heard of climate change or that bottling water released 2.5 million
tons of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere annually and took 17 million barrels
of oil to produce a year’s supply. She sighed and looked into the
haloes of whispy clouds and thought about how she was saving the planet by
walking 800 kilometres instead of driving a car.
She
breathed in slowly, savouring the moment. Ah, first at last! Would Rafe be
impressed? Even though she wasn’t a whiner, she was a lagger, and he was
forever turning back to make sure she was still trudging onward. The look in
his eyes accused her of lagging on purpose. She wouldn’t do that, would she?
Sniggering,
she lost herself in murderous thoughts of Tod, but she wasn’t so lost she missed
the grunting behind the scraggly bush where she’d propped herself.
She
carefully moved leaves aside and peered closer, afraid it was some weird
Spanish animal of the four-footed species. Why think the worst? She was drawn
to valleys made dark by black shadows. Why did she always see the dark side? ‘What
the—?’ She suspended her deep psychological musings. Lying spreadeagled, a head
wound gushing blood, was that whiner, Roderick.
‘Hey,
Ciara what have you found?’ Rafe had arrived, the group behind him, a motley
crew gasping, whining, mopping foreheads with kerchiefs.
She
shook her head.
Life
was a sick joke.
She never got
to be first.
But
look on the bright side, she thought. Roderick could have been some dangerous animal.
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!
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NCCO - Comments only. This was written specifically for WEP just for fun. Enjoy!
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