Welcome to my blog! Today I'm posting a little early for the February WEP (Write...Edit...Publish) challenge, 28 Days.
I struggled to come up with an idea for this prompt.
Finally, it hit me and I began to write faster than I've ever written before.
I began to imagine this refugee trudging through Africa heading for an imagined freedom. I come from a country where the boats are turned back, not a good look. Nor my belief. My argument is - what did I do to be lucky enough to be born in Australia? Nothing.
I want to share the fictional Abioye's story. But I'm not sure how fictional it is...
Steps to Freedom
He took another step.
Abioye looked down. He saw red dirt, swollen,
ripped feet, and his lengthening shadow. Miles behind him was his village,
burned and looted, everyone he loved, dead. Ahead of him lay freedom.
He took another step.
As he walked, he kept his eyes
on the roadside. Already he'd been lucky enough to find a rolled-up mattress, a
cringing dog, a goatskin of water to add to his swag. He'd been getting his
swag together for weeks - a few tins of supplies the warlords dropped when they
swooped into his village and drove off into the hills, automatic rifles over
their shoulders. They stole the UN dried milk tins from the mothers’ tents,
taking from the babies' mouths. They stole all the rice, showing not a whit of
conscience for the starving villagers.
Then they took more than supplies.
When there was nothing left to steal, one day they returned and took
the lives of everyone - all the old men, all the women, all the children. The
only survivors were the young men like him, young men who roamed the sparse
land, looking for edible herbs and grasses in the desert-like landscape. He'd returned at nightfall to the
devastation. He ran. If they found him, he'd be forced to become a boy soldier
like so many others who'd disappeared.
He took another step.
Abioye felt the sob in his
throat. But he was a man. He refused to cry despite what he'd lost.
He took another step. Then
another. And another.
It was the only way forward to the north. To the boats. To the
sea. To freedom.
He'd heard stories of boats
that left from Tangier in Morocco. Boats to take him across the water to another land. A
free land. A land with food. A land with jobs. He'd work in Tangier until he saved
enough to board the boat. He'd heard stories of a man who hired young men to
escort tourists through the medinas*. He'd heard it took 28 days of working 7
days a week to save enough for his trip to the new land. To Utopia.
He took another step. His feet
pained so much he was surprised when they moved. One step. Then another agonizing
step.
The sun beat down mercilessly.
He sipped from his meager water supply. He must make it last. He might walk for
months and find no village, no water, no food.
The dog cried. What could
Abioye do? He carefully poured a mouthful of water into his palm and the
dog lapped, not wasting a drop. It licked his leg in gratitude. Abioye reached
down and patted the mutt’s head.
He took another step.
Every few steps he had to
adjust his belt. He'd lost so much weight in the past few days, the belt kept slipping down over his
hips. Once he'd forgotten and the next thing he knew his trousers were flapping
around his ankles. He laughed at the ridiculous situation, then stopped, afraid
he was hysterical from the horror he’d seen. But it didn't matter if he
laughed, cried or screamed. There was no one to hear him. He was crossing the
Sahara Desert. Alone.
The road became rocky. He
stumbled. Landed on his knees. He was sobbing now. He couldn’t help it even
though he was wasting moisture. The sun. The rough road. The hunger. The
thirst. The vision of his parents' burned bodies. His young sisters. His beloved -- How could he go on?
The dog licked his face. Abioye dragged himself to his feet. He had to go on. In memory of his father, his
mother, his two sweet sisters, his Candis who’d been promised to him when they
were both three years old. They were all alive in his head.
Abioye took another step.
He felt like he was falling, not walking. Falling, falling,
falling, but never hitting the ground.
How long had he been on the road?
Was it 28 days already? Surely, soon, he must pass by the green plants that
leaked water. Then he and the dog could drink their fill. He felt the moisture
on the tip of his tongue as he dreamed of it.
I'm so tired. I need to
sleep. On my mattress. Just for a little while.
He took another step.
Toward the edge of the road.
He mustn't stop. To stop was death. Then there'd be no one to
remember his family. No one to remember his Candis. He saw her in his mind –
her wide smile, her red lips, her teeth pearly white, dazzling him, her short black
hair cropped close to her scalp, her graceful long limbs, her colourful dresses
that brushed the ground when she walked.
I will never forget you, my eternal love.
He took another step.
Whether it took 28 days or a year, he would press on. He would
make a new life. Away from his cursed land. The land that God forgot. Maybe God
had turned his back on Africa but still lived in that new land where the boat would
take him. Maybe God would welcome him to its shores and surround him with love
and plenty. Instead of sobbing, he smiled.
He'd seen mirages in the desert many times. A mirage was coming toward him. A big green tank shimmering
through the waves. Surely it was full of water.
He took another step.
The mirage came closer. No!
It was a jeep. Soldiers in the back. Soldiers in the front. Guns pointed. At him.
He spun around and took another
step. Away. Away from the killers. Away from bondage. Away from death.
He heard the dog yelp. His
throat closed over. Turning, he saw its head a bloody mess and its eyes
stared sightless into the searing sky.
'Stop or you're next!' One of the
soldiers waved his gun, then shot a round into the air. Crack! Crack! Crack!
'Don't take another step, boy.
Or you're dead.'
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* Medina - the old walled part of a North African town.
WORD COUNT: 976
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