Friday, 17 May 2013

LIKE DOGGY TALES? SECOND NOVEL BY CHARMAINE CLANCY : DOGNAPPED?, A DETECTIVE MYSTERY : WIN PRIZES : FREE ON KINDLE.SOON!

Hello there! Today I'm helping a good friend launch her second book. I absolutely loved her first children's book, My Zombie Dog, and have read drafts of her new book, Dognapped? Charmaine is a careful author -- she sends her drafts to fine editors, she conferences with professional book cover firms -- even though she's scarily talented in the visual arts department. The result is a professional self-published book...delightful.

So today I proudly present Charmaine and Dognapped? And there's prizes...and a narrow window of opportunity to get it FREE on the 22nd and 23rd May!!

Celebrate the release of Charmaine Clancy's new book and win prizes!

Dognapped? A dog show detective mystery featuring Kitty and her mischievous miniature schnauzer, Spade. In this adventure, they unravel the mystery of the missing dog -- simply lost, or something more sinister?

A lost dog

A stolen dog

A mysterious will


It all equals murder!

Meet twelve-year-old Kitty, friendless bookworm and amateur sleuth. All Kitty wants is to gain her mother’s attention, spend time with her miniature schnauzer Spade, and avoid Miss Perfect, Jessica Jones. 

Kitty’s world turns upside down when she finds a lost dog, and she needs Jessica’s help to find the owner, hunt down a dognapper, and solve a murder.

Introducing Kitty Walker and her mischievous dog Spade in the first Dog Show Detective Mystery.

Dognapped? is a mystery novel perfect for curious girls aged 10 -12yrs. There are funny and cute canine characters, but also an element of danger! 

To celebrate the release of Dognapped?, Charmaine Clancy (author of the popular kids' horror novel, My Zombie Dog), is giving away a Kindle Fire! (Kindle Paperwhite if winner resides outside the US - Amazon won't ship the Fire to non-US countries). That's not all, one lucky runner-up will receive a $25 Amazon gift voucher!

There are two ways to enter:

1. Purchase your copy of Dognapped?, then fill in the entry form below. You'll be asked for your receipt number from Amazon (it will be on the receipt Amazon email you - keep a copy of your receipt as proof of purchase if you win). Dognapped? will be FREE May 22nd and 23rd, and yes you can still enter if you downloaded your copy FREE
or
2. Blog about this competition or about Dognapped? (you can review, talk about or interview) then fill in the entry form below. You will be asked for your blog post link in the entry form. If you'd like to review the book, Charmaine will send you a free review copy, simply email: charmaineclancy@gmail.com

If you blog and purchase the book, then yes, you get two entries.

Too easy! This competition runs from now until 7 July 2013.


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  • I hope you will purchase Dognapped? -- could be a great gift for a young girl on her birthday, or start your Christmas shopping now!


Monday, 13 May 2013

LOCALE AS CHARACTER IN YOUR STORIES (1) - NEW ORLEANS - ROLAND YEOMANS

Hello there! 

For those who visited last week, I posted about Travel and Writing, and also about using our local area as settings for our stories. This led to some interesting comments and emails on the topic. Chances are better than extremely high that you've heard of voracious author, Roland Yeomans, who has manipulated his local area, New Orleans, to tremendous effect in his urban fantasies. I've asked him to share with us today...

   
Locale as Character.

Denise has allowed me to talk about why I chose New Orleans as the setting for so many of my urban fantasies.

How could I not?  New Orleans is called the most haunted city in America.  One of the first serial killers lived among the social elite in the 1830's.  Voodoo was big business.  Slavery even more so.

{Image courtesy of the talented Leonora Roy}
And criminals flourished here thanks to pirates like Jean Lafitte.  Did you know the term FENCING ITEMS was born here ... behind St. Louis Cathedral in its beautiful garden?
When my young hero, Victor Standish, and his ghoul friend, Alice Wentworth find themselves transported to the New Orleans of 1834 ...
to say it is a culture shock is an understatement!

The old French Market, New Orleans. Late 19th century street scene with cotton and other wagons rolling down cobblestone street; shops including hardware store, clothing store, seen in background.

{This image (and the four following) are in the public domain because their copyright has expired.This applies to Australia and the European Union }



Doing the research for UNDER A VOODOO MOON and THE RIVAL (where the bulk of Victor's 1834 adventures take place) was almost as much fun as the writing of the fantasies.


To say "Old" New Orleans was exotic is to understate the reality:



And the personalities living there were equally as colorful ... and dangerous:

1.) Madame Lalaurie:

      A Louisiana-born socialite and serial killer known for her involvement in the torture and murder of black slaves -- with the gleeful assistance of her equally sociopathic physician husband.

Victor and Alice provide the truth behind their mysterious disappearances.

2.) Annie Christmas:

     Sometimes a madam -- Annie Christmas was also a keelboat pilot on the lower Mississippi, a strong women and bully killer.

She was six feet eight inches tall, and weighed 250 pounds. Her mustache was blonde and curled, the finest and widest on the river.

Just let her hear a man say," I'm the bully of the town!" and he never said it again.

Annie takes the diminutive Alice under her not so tiny wing!

3.) James Bowie:

     His family settled on farms in present-day Catahoula Parish, where he and his brothers matured into adults.

The Bowies were active community people, and James is said to have been the largest local slaveholder, supposedly having at least twenty slaves. James often traded slaves with the pirate Jean Lafitte.

Alice provides the explanation why Jim Bowie went to the Alamo with only nine fingers.  Outraged at the source of his wealth, Alice had a "finger sandwich!"

Then, there was the culture:

Duels: 



{Listen to Victor speak of it on his way to duel President Andrew Jackson}

The most identifying trait of humanity was our ability to be inhumane to one another.  

In New Orleans, during the days of the French and Spanish rule, duels were often fought in St. Anthony’s Square, a garden that was located directly behind St. Louis Cathedral.  In 2005, I raced the Soyoko, evolved raptors, across that garden. 

Sheltered from prying eyes by the garden’s bushes and shrubs, sword fights continued until first blood was drawn.  But New Orleans was now American … with the American obsession with fighting to the death.

Some duels were now fought in a place on the Metarie Road called Les Trios Capelines, because of the three ancient Spanish moss-draped trees that grew there. 

The most celebrated of dueling grounds, however, was a giant grove of trees simply called The Oaks.
 
The spot was located on the plantation of Louis Allard which in 1834 was some distance from the city.  In the year 2005, it was part of the grounds of the city park. 


Victor's duel on horseback with drawn sabers against President Jackson is based on the very real duel between Col. Schaumberg of the U.S. Army and Alexander Cuvilier who fought on horseback with broadswords.  The only casualty was Schaumberg's horse.

2.) GAMBLING ON THE RIVER BOATS  -

The New Orleans, or Orleans, was the first Mississippi steamboat.

Launched in 1811 at Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania for a company organized by Robert Livingston and Robert Fulton, her designer, she was a large, heavy side-wheeler with a deep draft.  

Her low-pressure Boulton and Watt steam engine operated a complex power train that was also heavy and inefficient.

Gambling took many forms on riverboats. Gambling with one's life with the boilers aside, there were sharks around willing to fleece the unsuspecting rube.

As cities passed ordinances against gaming houses in town, the cheats moved to the unregulated waters of the Mississippi aboard river steamers.

{Saloon of Mississippi River Steamboat "Princess" 1861 gauche and collage painting by M Adrien Persac - Public Domain}

Let Victor Standish tell you of the most exotic, fine
riverboats in New Orleans:

Gambling on the Mississippi River had become an established institution.  Steamboats were the floating palaces for the elite of gamblers.  THE AEGEAN QUEEN all agreed was the Xanadu of them all.
When we walked into the saloon of THE AEGEAN QUEEN, Alice hushed in a breath.  I couldn’t fault her.  The ceiling had to arch forty feet above us. 

Crystal chandeliers slowly rotated, shedding rainbows of light down upon us.  The elite of New Orleans aristocracy ambled among themselves. 
There was a buzz whenever we passed a cluster of them.  Whispers poorly kept secret the fact that we were expected to die on board in some spectacular way.
 The way the women tittered in anticipation made me antsy.  The men laying bets on which of us would die first made me want to bust some heads.  I rubbed the inside of my right jacket arm, smiling mean. 
Waste not.  Want not.  I didn’t think the dead riverboat gambler, John Powell, would mind me taking his derringer.

{This work is in the public domain in the United States because it is a work prepared by an officer or employee of the United States Government as part of that person’s official duties under the terms of Title 17, Chapter 1, Section 105 of the US Code. See Copyright.}

Her jade mask gleaming creepily under the shifting lights of the chandeliers, Meilori seemed to glide up to us. 
“Let me show you to the main gambling room, dear guests.”
I smiled, “My, what big eyes you have Grandmother.”
Her eyes sharpened.  “I have read that Brothers Grimm tale, Standish.”
I tried to put that same edge to my smile.  “Then, you know how the wolf ended up.”
Meilori laughed without one trace of humanity.  “This is not a fairy tale, Victor Standish.”
Sam took her gloved hand, kissing it lightly and straightening said, “Threats only cheapen your loveliness, Your Majesty.”
“You have not seen my face, Sergeant McCord.”
“Ah, but the night is young.”
The look in both of their eyes was making me feel older by the second.  “Can we get this showboat on the road?”
Meilori turned to me and bubbled a laugh.  “When I shall have killed you, Standish, I will miss your strange sayings.”
Alice murmured, “Over my dead body, Empress.”
Meilori shrugged, “If you insist.”
Bowie snapped, “I hear a lot of threats.  But I do not see the kidnapped President Jackson.”
Meilori laughed brittle.  “All in good time, gentlemen and ghoul.”

So there you have why and how I used New Orleans as the setting for my 1834 New Orleans tale of time travel and the supernatural -- it even has a young Edgar Allan Poe in it!

 Your novel has to occur someplace -- make that place live for your reader -- and your tale will live for her/him as well.

Thanks for sharing with us Roland. I loved learninbg more of the history of this amazing city. It makes your stories even more real. 

If you'd like to purchase any of Roland's titles, here is the link to his blog


  • How about you? Do you research the history/culture of your locale as a background to your stories?



Monday, 6 May 2013

Does travel make our stories better? Paris, Italy, Hugh Jackman...er...Outback Queensland anyone?

Ah...ever since a family friend kept me supplied with cartons of Mills & Boon novels when I was about 13, I've been hooked--on exotic places. At 13 I wasn't so much thinking about boys, but the M&B stories certainly made me hard to please on that front, (not too many Italian Counts or French Dukes in Oz), but I was more hooked on the novels' settings.

SETTINGS! Yes! These handy little books took me to islands in Greece with sparkling white houses and brightly-painted blue doors dazzling in the sun--took me to lakes in Italy, chateaux in France bursting with vineyards, castles in England, haciendas in Spain. All of these were very exotic to a teenager who'd grown up in country Queensland. My state was only 100+ years old--we'd never build chateaux, our vineyards were well in the future, our 'haciendas' were plain old cattle properties with falling-down homesteads where women cried over lack of water to grow flowers.

So...I couldn't wait to finish my education and hit the road to places unknown...and that's a journey that never ends for me. But coupled with my love of soaking up new cultures, new lands, I find so much inspiration in exotic places that it turns up in my stories, it often is my story. I've just sent off a micro fiction hoping it will be one of 14 chosen to be printed on a cushion at the Queensland Writers Festival. It was influenced by Paris. My LETTERS story still under construction for the current RomanticFridayWriters challenge is set during the war on the Western Front near Ypres, Belgium. (Yep, been to the Flanders Fields, what a privilege!)

No! No! No! I can see you shaking your head--you don't have to travel to find exotic settings--your homegrown setting is exotic to everyone but you, and no one can write about your local area like you can, and I love reading your stories set in the places you inhabit. Look at Kittie Howard and her Louisiana stories. Roland Yeomans and his New Orleans' stories, Joy Campbell and her Jamican stories, just for starters! Love them! Now Harlequin Escape is actually asking for stories set in Outback Queensland! So my state has finally become exotic enough for readers! Nothing like dust, horses, snakes, with a few handsome, rugged stockmen and station owners thrown in, is there? (Think Hugh Jackman in Australia, the movie --okay, had to get him in somewhere. Much better than a foppish French Duke IMO).


Now, what's that picture of Paris bits and pieces doing here?

Those who travel a lot have their favourite places, and as most of you know, mine is Paris. If I see 'Paris' in a book title, or it's mentioned in the blurb, I must have it. Murder in Paris, Lunch in Paris, Rats in Paris Sewers...whatever...Browsing one of the excellent indie bookshops in West End on the weekend (Avid Reader), I see a little gift from Edward Rutherford.


Italy comes a close second to Paris--why do I devour each of Donna Leon's Commisario Brunetti books? Because Venice is the main character. Once you've been to Venice and have lost yourself in the backstreets, the canals and the bridges, reading about these in a great story is the next best thing. I've just picked up her latest, Jewels of Paradise. Looks like Brunetti doesn't feature for once. Okay, how come I can read so much? Well, I don't sleep much, sleep is over rated.

But be prepared to cop flak if you add objects to your settings that aren't actually there. Tourists to Corona, Italy, (the setting for Under the Tuscan Sun), complain vehemently when they can't find the fountain which featured in the touching La Dolce Vita scene in the movie. I've been to Corona, and nup, it's not there! But the villa, Bramasole, is.

So...where is this going? In future posts, I'm going to hopefully snaffle some authors and get them to tell us all how travel has enriched their stories or how they've played their local setting for all it's worth. Hope you'll pop by to hear what they have to say.

Meanwhile, you can also make money by selling your travel stories to magazines. Sometimes they pay money, sometimes they pay with a subscription to the mag, sometimes they gift you with travel-related gadgets or luggage. All good.


What do you think?

  • Do you often/sometimes choose books just because of the setting? 
  • Do you write books as a result of your travels? Or do you think of a preferred setting then travel for research?
  • Do you prefer settings that no amount of travel provides -- sci-fi land, fantasyland, steampunk??



Wednesday, 1 May 2013

Insecure Writers Support Group : Why SOME Published Novels Fail to Sell (according to Donald Maas) : Romantic Friday Writers New Challenge :: LETTERS

Hello everyone! Finally, I'm posting again. The madness that is April is over for the A-Zers, and now it is back to the 'normal' business of blogging, for some of us, anyway.

I survived the house move in early April, but my writing time suffered, naturally. I'm back teaching. [Speaking of which, I've created another blog, Free English Resources where I post on many topics -- literature, grammar, punctuation, book reviews, analysis, current Australian curriculum streams... It's open to all. I don't have many followers--that's not the point--but I have heaps of page views, so I'm hopeful I'm putting something back into the educational community.] You're welcome to visit and use the resources if you're interested. I'm also back blogging and setting challenges for RomanticFridayWriters with Donna Hole, who's also been on blog hiatus too, writing up a storm.

Today, for IWSG, my post is about the topic - Why do some published books not sell?

I started thinking about this when reading an article by Donald Maas in the Writers Digest. He's a favourite how-to writer of mine.

We've all seen it in blogland -- at times rather vicious comments when an author's book fails to sell. The blame is often laid firmly at the feet of the book-industry, where some publisher failed to promote the author. Other things to blame -- terrible cover (I had a better idea, but they forced this one on me), horrible blurb (I didn't really write that badly, did I?), the timing was right off (how could they release my book called A Crocodile Ate My Lunch on the same day that a crocodile ate a tourist?)...come on, the list is LONG.

There are many vagaries in the publishing industry and unpublished authors try to learn all they can before that magical day when they sign a contract (or in the case of self-pubbed, they hit Publish on Amazon or wherever).

Some books are published on the evidence of several best sellers by the author. I've just abandoned A Casual Vacancy a little over halfway through. I like to read books with bad reviews just to get my own take on them, but I feel like I wasted several late nights which would have been better spent reading a 'good' book. (I don't usually say negative things about books, but Rowling's sales won't be impacted one whit by my opinion). J K Rowling didn't have to worry about whether her book would sell or not--her huge audience would buy it anyway, even though I couldn't find one likeable character out of the dozens of characters she bombarded the reader with in the first few chapters. I hated the foul language, I didn't care for the plot at all and could care less how it turned out (I hear a lot of the characters die, but do I care? Nuh.) I love books about village life by writers such as Rosamund Pilcher and Sybil Marshall, but this one I feel was written for its shock value. Of course, you may have read it and LOVED it, so ignore me.

My point is, there are lots of reasons a book sells or doesn't sell, but it is universally agreed (and Maas makes this point) that 'Great novels not only draw us in immediately but command our attention. They not only hold our interest but hold us rapt.'

Let's get to and write a novel like that. If we don't we have only ourselves to blame if it fails to sell.

I'll list some of the culprits Maas declares may be responsible for a published book failing to sell:
  1. Timid Voice - this DOES NOT command attention.
  2. Untested Characters - Make sure your characters show spine, take courage, have high principles or face their deepest fears.
  3. Overly Interior or Exterior Stories - Be the god of your story world. Interior stories need dramatic outward events. Dramatic outward events need to create a devastating interior impact.
I'll finish with another quote from Donald Maas: 'Runaway success comes from great fiction, period. The publishing industry may help or hinder but cannot stop a powerful story from being powerful.'

But really...there's no failure per se, there are only disappointing sales...


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Now, if you want to flex your story writing muscles this May, RomanticFridayWriters has a challenge for you. 

LETTERS will be the central theme of our May challenge. You can use letters any way you like. 

'Letters are among the most significant memorial a person can leave behind them.' van Goethe.

Multi-generic writing is popular ATM, probably always has been. Multi-generic writing includes embedding other text types within your prose/poetry. Within prose you could add letter/s to/from lovers, letters could form the bulk of your story. You could add other text forms  -- dea th certificate, diary entries, appointment calendars, a found note..be as creative as you want!  Your entry will be a free-flowing story interspersed with whispers from the lives of the lovers. A poetic entry could be interspersed with the same type of texts -- let your imagination have free rein.

HERE ARE A FEW IDEAS:

*One of the lovers may have gone away - to work, to war, has left the relationship, wants time out...
* Someone has been left at home - fretting, upset, determined to save the relationship, determined to have revenge
* Perhaps one of the lovers wants a holiday by themselves, (not unusual these days), and the one left at home is furious, feels unloved, or relieved to have some time out too

These are scenarios that just pop into my head. Your entry may use all/none of these suggestions. It is your story, your way, your era...just let's go back to a romantic element in whatever form we write for this challenge.

You can sign up now, or you can wait until you've written your story. Entries to be posted on Friday 24 May - Sunday 26th May. 





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Wednesday, 10 April 2013

A to Z Challenge : Moving and Writing

My Max Brenner Hug-a-Mug of hot chocolate. 

I've done it for 3 years and loved it, but this year too much is happening. We all know of the time drain that is the A - Z -- writing the posts is the easy part, but there is a lot of visiting/commenting to do.

What I'm doing in April -- firstly, I'm moving house. You all know what a joy that is. I'm moving from our inner-city Brisbane apartment across the river to a townhouse Heritage style, in West End, a very trendy avante garde suburb, full of great restaurants, book shops, organic food stores and overall a great vibe. I'll have my own office for writing and teaching. So the move, although exhausting, will be worthwhile.

I've also set myself the challenge of completing edits on my novel, Fijian Princess, and have it ready for submission by the end of April. Luckily it's school holidays for the first two weeks of April in Australia, so a little less drain on my time.

I am writing my short stories for writing competitions. My Writing Group encourages writing for competitions. I usually choose one and focus on that, otherwise I end up entering none! I'm currently happy with my story idea for a 'homelessness' theme, due end of April.

I will also be posting occasionally -- I'll be back for the Insecure Writers Support Group tomorrow and may post once a week.

So this year I'm not in with all the excitement of the A - Z, but I'm clapping in the background.

  • If you'd like me to come visit you (I want to visit my friends once a week to catch up on their posts), please leave a comment. Makes it easier to comment on my phone when I'm in transit--which is where I do most of my blog commenting. 


All the best A - Zers!