tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post9172478631387299035..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: Share Your Darlings Blogfest - July 1Denise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-36148554989442841942010-07-08T08:10:36.922+10:002010-07-08T08:10:36.922+10:00Lydia, thank you. I enjoyed trolling through your ...Lydia, thank you. I enjoyed trolling through your blog the other day. Nice to meet you too!<br /><br />Terri: Thank you for dropping by. I will be over to check you out too. Glad you like the French/Aussie connection. Yeah, couldn't be more different! That's why it's a 'best of both worlds' kinda thing to me!<br /><br />missali: Thank you for the award. I'll be by to pick it up and do whatever I have to.<br /><br />VR Barkowski: thank you for the comments on my extract. I'll be over to check out the awards. Thank you.<br /><br />Talei: Thanks for commenting on the opening line. I love a good hook and worked hard for that one!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-34213230887730801482010-07-08T06:43:58.119+10:002010-07-08T06:43:58.119+10:00Ooh great scene, I can feel that sizzling attracti...Ooh great scene, I can feel that sizzling attraction. I especially love the opening line- reeled me in hook,line and sinker! ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-69640695479221289412010-07-08T00:53:02.169+10:002010-07-08T00:53:02.169+10:00Lovely. A fish out of water (forgive the pun) is a...Lovely. A fish out of water (forgive the pun) is an excellent way to increase the tension. Absolutely loved, 'Was it a French Custom?'/'Was it an Australian custom?' Their mutual unease is charming. Well done!<br /><br />Oh, and before I forget: I, too, have a couple of awards for you on my blog. :)VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-41113114149256924472010-07-07T06:21:24.717+10:002010-07-07T06:21:24.717+10:00hi! just wanted to let you know there is an award ...hi! just wanted to let you know there is an award on my blog for you :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-59399863601796649272010-07-07T03:47:52.593+10:002010-07-07T03:47:52.593+10:00Hi, I'm visiting from Maria's blog block p...Hi, I'm visiting from Maria's blog block party, it's crowded in here with all the blog parties! I love it!<br /><br />I signed up to follow, I love your photos of Paris (my favortie city in the world) and can't wait to read more about how to mix French and Aussie. That's quite a cocktail.<br /><br />Terri<br />www.whyifearclowns.comTerri Coophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461583056862465783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-11091424031103586512010-07-04T01:41:11.555+10:002010-07-04T01:41:11.555+10:00Sounds like an exciting meeting. Tingles are alway...Sounds like an exciting meeting. Tingles are always a good thing. :)<br /> Nice to meet you!Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-30260487045210975792010-07-03T14:52:52.664+10:002010-07-03T14:52:52.664+10:00Margo: Thank you for your comments. I take on boar...Margo: Thank you for your comments. I take on board the points you make..:)<br /><br />Alexandrea: Thank you. So sweet..:)<br /><br />Julie: Thank you..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-74012147844100430572010-07-03T09:29:52.788+10:002010-07-03T09:29:52.788+10:00Such a great scene! Well done.Such a great scene! Well done.Julie Musilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02150454913885915017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-64618060898216500062010-07-03T06:45:02.386+10:002010-07-03T06:45:02.386+10:00I have a little something for you on my blog! Hope...I have a little something for you on my blog! Hope you have a nice day:)Privatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018596012893869692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-58652102348315553672010-07-03T00:47:26.198+10:002010-07-03T00:47:26.198+10:00Great description in this scene and you pulled off...Great description in this scene and you pulled off moving from Ruby's to Michael's thoughts and back really well, that's a rare writing ability. Your sunset scene was so beautifully written you don't even need the "colors were magnificent" part to set it up. And I totally get the moments that are so perfect you can ruin them by reaching for a camera. <br /><br />Hope you can stop by and read my darling, too.Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-43038051536865273202010-07-02T18:01:04.452+10:002010-07-02T18:01:04.452+10:00Donna, ha ha! Tres droll! Hmm, steamy huh? Right o...Donna, ha ha! Tres droll! Hmm, steamy huh? Right on!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-46211474942263322782010-07-02T13:39:21.297+10:002010-07-02T13:39:21.297+10:00I'm hearing accordian music in the back of my ...I'm hearing accordian music in the back of my head. Tre lala! (notice I don't speak a word of French lol)<br /><br />This feels like it could get very steamy.<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73418869051495911982010-07-02T13:17:53.934+10:002010-07-02T13:17:53.934+10:00Denise, Thank you for looking at my blog. I took a...Denise, Thank you for looking at my blog. I took a peek at yours too!! It's nice! I like the Paris pics.<br /><br />CarmenCarmenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17777358338889417005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-12251114659466986372010-07-02T11:20:56.501+10:002010-07-02T11:20:56.501+10:00Francine, glad you like it..:)
Aubrie: Thanks..:...Francine, glad you like it..:) <br /><br />Aubrie: Thanks..:)<br /><br />Michelle: Thanks. Thanks for hosting.<br /><br />Raquel: Thanks for nice comments..:)<br /><br />Dawn: Thanks. Yeah, I totally want to click away all the teme..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7403883281474448712010-07-02T06:19:13.647+10:002010-07-02T06:19:13.647+10:00Nice work. I think the small touches, like mention...Nice work. I think the small touches, like mentioned in the other comments are what make this scene stand out. I liked the part about the sunset and the verdict on not taking time to get out the camera. While pictures are nice, it's never quite as good as the personal experience of the viewing.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-68150549283123105312010-07-02T05:53:45.062+10:002010-07-02T05:53:45.062+10:00This was very sweet. I liked the hand kiss and wha...This was very sweet. I liked the hand kiss and whales. So dreamy. Nice post.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-30812982173173073392010-07-02T00:35:47.387+10:002010-07-02T00:35:47.387+10:00i love the whole scene. makes me want to be there....i love the whole scene. makes me want to be there. i esp. love this line: "Not only was she in a foreign country, she felt she was a foreigner in her own body." great comparison. thanks for participating.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-31958555387563247312010-07-01T21:04:49.061+10:002010-07-01T21:04:49.061+10:00Oh boy electric tingles....I love reading about sm...Oh boy electric tingles....I love reading about small touches. Great scene!Aubriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10884036126491922530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73123094919460852232010-07-01T20:46:14.532+10:002010-07-01T20:46:14.532+10:00Hi,
Oooh la la, the touch, the look!
Can feel th...Hi,<br /><br />Oooh la la, the touch, the look!<br /><br />Can feel the suppressed desire from here, and all that bracing salty air and sun-tanned male hands. . . Hee hee, where next I wonder ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.com