tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post93838649150662953..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: Show me yours blogfest. My NaNo excerpt. Death on Nantucket.Denise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-71743623467731594472011-01-14T09:31:49.885+10:002011-01-14T09:31:49.885+10:00Excellent teaser scene. There is enough informatio...Excellent teaser scene. There is enough information to give us a pretty good idea about what is going on and you leave us wanting more.<br /><br />Lee<br /> <a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-68788424130600623822011-01-06T07:02:38.736+10:002011-01-06T07:02:38.736+10:00Amie: This is the best compliment you can give.Amie: This is the best compliment you can give.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-17609953452110034272011-01-05T21:22:49.042+10:002011-01-05T21:22:49.042+10:00Oh, holy... you can't stop there! Augh!
I kn...Oh, holy... you can't stop there! Augh!<br /><br />I know this might sound like a strange compliment, but I can really *see* this scene as I read it, it's fantastic.Amie Kaufmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15116472165351759477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-69305009314697501372011-01-05T16:08:49.916+10:002011-01-05T16:08:49.916+10:00Kerri, Tracey, Lacey: Glad you enjoyed it!Kerri, Tracey, Lacey: Glad you enjoyed it!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-55042530236189907002011-01-05T15:03:05.076+10:002011-01-05T15:03:05.076+10:00Happy New Year! May there be many more fabulous e...Happy New Year! May there be many more fabulous excerpts to come.Lacey Devlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05716109142743069204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-61608979813952250982011-01-05T12:42:57.249+10:002011-01-05T12:42:57.249+10:00Wow, that was intense! What a great read! Definite...Wow, that was intense! What a great read! Definitely makes me curious what happens to her. Thanks for sharing!Ava Z.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14396315936946338742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-74439843586110790652011-01-05T07:32:21.654+10:002011-01-05T07:32:21.654+10:00I want to read MORE!!I want to read MORE!!kerriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05013226271426913979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-22619585215211149352011-01-05T06:35:26.440+10:002011-01-05T06:35:26.440+10:00Clarissa, Jessica, Misha, Tara, Lisa, Lydia: I hop...Clarissa, Jessica, Misha, Tara, Lisa, Lydia: I hope you get to read my book!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-36817968453925554432011-01-05T06:05:22.635+10:002011-01-05T06:05:22.635+10:00That was a great excerpt! I was on the edge of my ...That was a great excerpt! I was on the edge of my seat.<br />:)Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-48027683652675553702011-01-05T03:14:10.798+10:002011-01-05T03:14:10.798+10:00Very strong writing & excellent dialogue. I lo...Very strong writing & excellent dialogue. I look forward to reading the entire book.notesfromnadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09904500676081267972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-37232519655012674442011-01-05T01:12:42.106+10:002011-01-05T01:12:42.106+10:00Oh, this is right up my alley! Great snip.Oh, this is right up my alley! Great snip.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73594865981950843392011-01-04T19:20:45.511+10:002011-01-04T19:20:45.511+10:00Oh my word that was good. Almost literally a cliff...Oh my word that was good. Almost literally a cliffhanger. ;-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7454507944167743022011-01-04T14:20:20.694+10:002011-01-04T14:20:20.694+10:00OOOOOOh creepy creepy! It reminds me of all the my...OOOOOOh creepy creepy! It reminds me of all the mystery books that I read of my mom's haha Thanks so much for sharing!Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-33887623628659126372011-01-04T13:04:53.523+10:002011-01-04T13:04:53.523+10:00Scar! Wow, you have a great novel there. Can't...Scar! Wow, you have a great novel there. Can't wait to read the final product.<br />CDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-64664814224297881212011-01-04T12:49:47.088+10:002011-01-04T12:49:47.088+10:00Ooh, I think Ronaldo is creeping you all off!Ooh, I think Ronaldo is creeping you all off!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-63017680683008184582011-01-04T12:02:44.102+10:002011-01-04T12:02:44.102+10:00Methinks Ronaldo is not a very nice man...
Very t...Methinks Ronaldo is not a very nice man...<br /><br />Very tense and thrilling. Nice touch about the bees.Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17889762915886434493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-23566097358597501232011-01-04T11:36:50.477+10:002011-01-04T11:36:50.477+10:00Ooh glad I'm not alone reading this, very chil...Ooh glad I'm not alone reading this, very chilling and suspenseful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-46092810487265579452011-01-04T11:05:20.485+10:002011-01-04T11:05:20.485+10:00Holy crow! The way you built tension here and the ...Holy crow! The way you built tension here and the intensity of this whole excerpt rocked! Great job... though you certainly could've left me in a nicer place.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-71876779489650638092011-01-04T09:58:04.075+10:002011-01-04T09:58:04.075+10:00Not nice!!! Not nice at all, leaving me hanging li...Not nice!!! Not nice at all, leaving me hanging like that!!!! <br /><br />Bravo! That guy is creepy and you depicted it so well *shudder*<br /><br />Hmmm. You gotta hurry up and get this published, I want to read the rest of it!The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-55623132045914417562011-01-04T09:02:57.588+10:002011-01-04T09:02:57.588+10:00Excellent. Well done. One thing you may or may not...Excellent. Well done. One thing you may or may not know. The quotes should be double quote marks not singe. Love it.<br />NancyN. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-57014133618958029402011-01-04T08:52:30.479+10:002011-01-04T08:52:30.479+10:00You have me on the edge of my seat. Wonderful anta...You have me on the edge of my seat. Wonderful antagonist. Thanks for sharing.Lisa Pottshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11676087488599338569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-64380310789119180062011-01-04T08:28:30.838+10:002011-01-04T08:28:30.838+10:00Yikes!!!! As a lead-in to the climax, this scene i...Yikes!!!! As a lead-in to the climax, this scene is awesome.Elizabeth Twisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133959633383307056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-13050175041925901402011-01-04T08:06:52.225+10:002011-01-04T08:06:52.225+10:00Very powerful stuff. I assume that Ronaldo was the...Very powerful stuff. I assume that Ronaldo was the one who assaulted her earlier in the story. He's an amazingly creepy villain.<br />I liked Shakira's voice, especially when she keeps noticing all of the ways that he's keeping from leaving evidence.<br />Thank you for sharing this scene with us!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-6910794805159651112011-01-04T07:36:45.067+10:002011-01-04T07:36:45.067+10:00Is there anything more fun that a psycho killer (o...Is there anything more fun that a psycho killer (or creepy stalker or mad rapist or whatever)? Great tension, I hope she gets away!!!Teri Anne Stanleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15500524348027951939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-50487252400471840042011-01-04T06:41:26.101+10:002011-01-04T06:41:26.101+10:00Thank you all. Yes, a bit tense eh?Thank you all. Yes, a bit tense eh?Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.com