tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post6585001365113764205..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: #RomanticFridayWriters challenge for June 17 - My story, 'Up, up and away' - an adrenalin rush.Denise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-13530994567532354132011-07-07T09:53:03.314+10:002011-07-07T09:53:03.314+10:00Oh gosh...I need to know what happens next, Denise...Oh gosh...I need to know what happens next, Denise!!!! Please? :)Len Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13394563639136301725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-14972245347854495112011-07-01T13:45:56.977+10:002011-07-01T13:45:56.977+10:00Intense!! Is that the end? What happens!
Congrats...Intense!! Is that the end? What happens!<br /><br />Congrats on the publication!alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-79557613387310674242011-06-26T15:38:55.431+10:002011-06-26T15:38:55.431+10:00Had to stop and read this again, go thing too, my ...Had to stop and read this again, go thing too, my first comment wasn't here. Hope this one makes it. Love the suspense in this story. I was wondering if she made it, or at least if she made it in one piece.<br />Now I know.<br /><br />Have fun on your trip. Take lots of pictures and notes.<br /><br />Pamela JoTheres just lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01557649636152032566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-54465999949816545852011-06-25T19:41:09.082+10:002011-06-25T19:41:09.082+10:00Oh wow I loved the description of the falling, the...Oh wow I loved the description of the falling, the blur of colours at the end it kept me hooked throughout! Have you ever been sky diving perchance? :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-35171465953790540092011-06-25T05:24:46.476+10:002011-06-25T05:24:46.476+10:00Hope you're having a good globe trot. Sounds ...Hope you're having a good globe trot. Sounds wonderful! Can't wait to hear all about it.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-3511285086693158162011-06-24T17:53:40.298+10:002011-06-24T17:53:40.298+10:00Excellent story!
Chemical FusionExcellent story!<br /><br /><a href="http://steamyfantasy.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> Chemical Fusion</a>Enid Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12248877161249788607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-5380074839879196302011-06-21T09:13:29.704+10:002011-06-21T09:13:29.704+10:00Oh my gosh, you scared me witless. I loath the tho...Oh my gosh, you scared me witless. I loath the thought of jumping out of a plane. Can't understand why anyone but soldiers would find it necessary and that's why I'll never be a soldier.<br /><br />Have fun globe trotting! I'm so excited for you.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-84379392818184409062011-06-20T19:31:53.411+10:002011-06-20T19:31:53.411+10:00That was a quick thrill Denise, I didn't think...That was a quick thrill Denise, I didn't think she was going to make it. Have fun on your travels, you lucky lady!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-40106553235723863592011-06-19T09:27:02.278+10:002011-06-19T09:27:02.278+10:00That was scary!! My head is spinning and hope all ...That was scary!! My head is spinning and hope all worked out OK with the landing. Have a great vacation.Ingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02924736131382149056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-59648199801605844952011-06-18T13:40:13.324+10:002011-06-18T13:40:13.324+10:00Great tension and suspense.... WELL DONE! I can se...Great tension and suspense.... WELL DONE! I can see why it was published.<br /><br />HAVE A WONDERFUL HOLIDAY!Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-10104815839917830252011-06-18T12:27:35.543+10:002011-06-18T12:27:35.543+10:00Very nice! Great ending with just the right kind o...Very nice! Great ending with just the right kind of edge-of-your-seat expectancy. I like it that we don't know what happens in the end. That's what makes it a great story!<br /><br />♥ Mary Mary<br /><br />(Sorry, I had to delete the last comment because I forgot to add which one of us stopped by!)The Sisterhoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889577041903181315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-90051289156432536692011-06-18T12:23:04.939+10:002011-06-18T12:23:04.939+10:00This comment has been removed by the author.The Sisterhoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889577041903181315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-51003893201864551602011-06-18T12:01:48.447+10:002011-06-18T12:01:48.447+10:00So glad she made it! I'd be way to scared to t...So glad she made it! I'd be way to scared to try a sky dive...<br />Have a great trip Denise! Soooo jealous that you're going to Spain. Will you be near Palos or Barcelona or Toledo? All the places in my novel...Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-21162007103530820072011-06-17T22:17:10.296+10:002011-06-17T22:17:10.296+10:00Hi,
Hee hee; classic piece of free-fall fiction! ...Hi,<br /><br />Hee hee; classic piece of free-fall fiction! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73654998654043141612011-06-17T21:58:36.624+10:002011-06-17T21:58:36.624+10:00Great story - wonderful conflict in the first part...Great story - wonderful conflict in the first part, exciting action in the second. Bravo!Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-67160832825889859642011-06-17T21:14:52.623+10:002011-06-17T21:14:52.623+10:00Brilliant read! Enjoy your holiday!Brilliant read! Enjoy your holiday!Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-58169424968066368702011-06-17T21:10:12.437+10:002011-06-17T21:10:12.437+10:00What a fast paced and gripping tale. Leaves you wo...What a fast paced and gripping tale. Leaves you wondering if she made it until you left the answer in your comment. :-D Great write. Enjoy your hols!andymac89https://www.blogger.com/profile/16504896361566138574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-80277282754839054662011-06-17T20:04:54.726+10:002011-06-17T20:04:54.726+10:00Hee hee guys. Signing in from Seoul. I reckon she ...Hee hee guys. Signing in from Seoul. I reckon she makes it, that's why poor Fazie's calling 'Jilli!' First person POV she wouldn't have heard him otherwise I'm thinking.<br /><br />After 11 hours in the air I've gotta get me some grub. Catch you all later. Thanks for reading.<br /><br />Denise<3Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-69257869735111856942011-06-17T18:16:33.525+10:002011-06-17T18:16:33.525+10:00im an optimist, she would make it:)
A lovely "...im an optimist, she would make it:)<br />A lovely " up up and away":)tarunimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00924642457573448209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-52689759332305452512011-06-17T17:09:07.868+10:002011-06-17T17:09:07.868+10:00Ohh the tension! Would make it, I say!
Loved this...Ohh the tension! Would make it, I say!<br /><br />Loved this story.Nashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14984530648140460594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-77394400898540754612011-06-17T07:06:20.818+10:002011-06-17T07:06:20.818+10:00Oh my! I held my breath through the whole piece! T...Oh my! I held my breath through the whole piece! The pace is fantastic.<br /><br />I could only jump out of a plane IF my life depended on it....never for my birthday. Give me perfume and chocolates any day!<br /><br />A fabulous Up, Up And Away :-)Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-37424792768189009002011-06-17T05:56:21.863+10:002011-06-17T05:56:21.863+10:00OMG, this made me almost wee wee in my pants! You ...OMG, this made me almost wee wee in my pants! You have some great imagery here, and I'm choosing to believe she made it, too. Is that true about the survival float??Alleged Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04869021184116123477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73646618469974270472011-06-17T03:47:39.039+10:002011-06-17T03:47:39.039+10:00I'm an optimist. She made it :)I'm an optimist. She made it :)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-52595642947018986072011-06-17T02:06:22.037+10:002011-06-17T02:06:22.037+10:00Denise, I read this before I went to work & I&...Denise, I read this before I went to work & I'm reading it again now I've got a short break...I'm none the wiser!<br />Don't leave me hanging (no pun intended)...did she make it?The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-39616117680256196592011-06-17T01:48:27.000+10:002011-06-17T01:48:27.000+10:00I like this short story -- maybe they should use i...I like this short story -- maybe they should use it as required reading in those flight schools where they train you to jump!notesfromnadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09904500676081267972noreply@blogger.com