tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post3724825350877890030..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: Second Crusader Challenge - Flash Fiction FREEDOM RIDERSDenise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-36133123168991906632011-03-27T12:07:42.545+10:002011-03-27T12:07:42.545+10:00Oooh, love how you have her 'escape' mirro...Oooh, love how you have her 'escape' mirroring the gold fish's. Guess she showed...whichever charming type was calling her a loser!Adina Westhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08860528131098237473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-89324945553889059042011-03-27T11:39:13.534+10:002011-03-27T11:39:13.534+10:00Hi Denise! Enjoyed the Goldfish story very much. I...Hi Denise! Enjoyed the Goldfish story very much. I hope the fish makes it!! LOLDanettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043881305977386629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-22611250880141904082011-03-26T15:12:57.174+10:002011-03-26T15:12:57.174+10:00Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-29414763842244499012011-03-26T13:43:09.589+10:002011-03-26T13:43:09.589+10:00Very nice imagery. Loved it. And I agree with J.L....Very nice imagery. Loved it. And I agree with J.L. Campbell, loved the line ... swimming to the front door and freedom. Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-59746814339630113242011-03-26T12:19:32.341+10:002011-03-26T12:19:32.341+10:00Very interesting to see what different people have...Very interesting to see what different people have done in this challenge. <br /><br />Loved this line...The goldfish was gasping for air, riding the low tide, swimming to the front door and freedom.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-24820703949246352462011-03-26T04:09:49.409+10:002011-03-26T04:09:49.409+10:00A sad little story, but with a bit of hope at the ...A sad little story, but with a bit of hope at the end!Witless Expositionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455282931743006892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-68184655810880751532011-03-26T03:13:45.293+10:002011-03-26T03:13:45.293+10:00I enjoyed this one...nicely done!
NikkiI enjoyed this one...nicely done!<br /><br />NikkiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-10074066167360498822011-03-25T22:01:06.569+10:002011-03-25T22:01:06.569+10:00Margo: Thanks!Margo: Thanks!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-30406741511149439292011-03-25T19:07:25.501+10:002011-03-25T19:07:25.501+10:00Fabulous flash piece! So visual and so much story ...Fabulous flash piece! So visual and so much story in there - excellent!Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-47185633661320459282011-03-25T07:31:42.067+10:002011-03-25T07:31:42.067+10:00Constance, Kari Marie, JC, Alberta, Nicole, Cather...Constance, Kari Marie, JC, Alberta, Nicole, Catherine, Jeanne, Alison: Thank you all for your kind comments and rooting for little goldie and freedom!<br /><br />Denise<3Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7729144683742706212011-03-25T06:04:58.126+10:002011-03-25T06:04:58.126+10:00Riding the low tide to freedom--that's great!Riding the low tide to freedom--that's great!Alison Pearce Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955543150406880055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-16809692065692939132011-03-25T04:09:43.652+10:002011-03-25T04:09:43.652+10:00Loved it. The whole shebang....was a great word ch...Loved it. The whole shebang....was a great word choice and unusual.jkraus8464https://www.blogger.com/profile/15138306757339514666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-13697042580691175952011-03-25T03:51:00.967+10:002011-03-25T03:51:00.967+10:00Excellent reapartee, I love the line 'riding t...Excellent reapartee, I love the line 'riding the low tide'. Great post!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-67467050571836517332011-03-24T23:55:35.759+10:002011-03-24T23:55:35.759+10:00A true lemons-to-lemonade story! I was rooting fo...A true lemons-to-lemonade story! I was rooting for the narrator :)) Great entry, Denise!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-56556262959541852402011-03-24T19:16:35.053+10:002011-03-24T19:16:35.053+10:00go fish go fish - nice onego fish go fish - nice onealberta rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132420168908365099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-14463950579278945822011-03-24T19:01:32.806+10:002011-03-24T19:01:32.806+10:00I like how both the fish and Rosie is heading for ...I like how both the fish and Rosie is heading for freedom. Good on her!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-14939641848951247412011-03-24T10:57:30.256+10:002011-03-24T10:57:30.256+10:00I love the imager of Goldie riding the low tide to...I love the imager of Goldie riding the low tide to freedom. I love the ending!Kari Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04404956407734167300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-67931304548789814532011-03-24T10:45:57.306+10:002011-03-24T10:45:57.306+10:00"go little fish GO..."
Great entry!
Go..."go little fish GO..."<br /><br />Great entry!<br /><br />Good luck :)<br /><br />SarahSarah Ketleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13421335686195152108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-90739643016548417812011-03-24T10:25:51.428+10:002011-03-24T10:25:51.428+10:00Donea: Thank you, 'coz she is.Donea: Thank you, 'coz she is.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-34307587048235741222011-03-24T09:14:54.871+10:002011-03-24T09:14:54.871+10:00Fun and nicely descriptive! Love it! :) Rosie IS...Fun and nicely descriptive! Love it! :) Rosie IS a winner!Donea Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15393184831994368021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-9269809989848365882011-03-24T07:01:19.426+10:002011-03-24T07:01:19.426+10:00Great to see that the general consensus is that go...Great to see that the general consensus is that goldie survived. Course it did...Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-91848220993137182572011-03-24T06:16:28.036+10:002011-03-24T06:16:28.036+10:00I like how you described everything that came out ...I like how you described everything that came out of the goldfish bowl. It gave the flashfic some detail :)<br /><br />And I love how the fish is on its way to freedom. Great picture too.Michelle Merrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00040685503147648297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-34099675334695866682011-03-24T05:11:11.543+10:002011-03-24T05:11:11.543+10:00Interesting take to have the woman inspired by the...Interesting take to have the woman inspired by the goldfish. Nice!Ben Langhinrichshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-65195277461070872212011-03-24T02:53:38.462+10:002011-03-24T02:53:38.462+10:00Women can be so vindictive.Women can be so vindictive.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-77082409289196147442011-03-24T01:40:54.698+10:002011-03-24T01:40:54.698+10:00Nice flashfic, and like Cherie Reich said, the det...Nice flashfic, and like Cherie Reich said, the details of the pebbles and greenery (etc) are great description. Rah for Rosie and the fishie!Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.com