tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post1171989312313694599..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: Travelling Solo - Word Painting Blogfest entryDenise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-25691329329838963562010-09-02T11:15:38.406+10:002010-09-02T11:15:38.406+10:00Dawn, thanks for the PacMan comment. I would think...Dawn, thanks for the PacMan comment. I would think that nearly everyone, even the younger gen would know PacMan. I must check that. Thanks for the comment..:)<br /><br />WritersBlock: Sorry. It seemed to have this effect on many..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-89622760022396650732010-09-02T07:56:46.755+10:002010-09-02T07:56:46.755+10:00Gave me the shivers and I found myself scratching ...Gave me the shivers and I found myself scratching while reading this haha. Great job!JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12710025691586074051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-36667961160614758862010-08-30T13:43:12.535+10:002010-08-30T13:43:12.535+10:00Excellent job. Sometimes things like "pacman&...Excellent job. Sometimes things like "pacman" can kind of date the writing but I think it works in this piece. I really liked it and the introduction paragraphs to the story.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-60756294440712741242010-08-30T12:21:35.018+10:002010-08-30T12:21:35.018+10:00Lynda,yes, it had this affect on most people. Than...Lynda,yes, it had this affect on most people. Thanks for your comment..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-16731634715955315602010-08-30T09:23:06.214+10:002010-08-30T09:23:06.214+10:00Another great flash. I started itching while I rea...Another great flash. I started itching while I read it ;)Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-52180675451388065772010-08-30T08:23:07.250+10:002010-08-30T08:23:07.250+10:00Theresa, Damyanti, Erin, Eric, Arlee, Laura: Obvio...Theresa, Damyanti, Erin, Eric, Arlee, Laura: Obviously my description worked, love it or hate it it had the desired effect. Thank you for wriggling, reading and commenting..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-87865106446088468912010-08-30T05:51:28.522+10:002010-08-30T05:51:28.522+10:00You did such a terrific job with description that ...You did such a terrific job with description that I'm itching all over!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-67972939133373145372010-08-29T14:42:41.428+10:002010-08-29T14:42:41.428+10:00Not my idea of a fun vacation.
Lee
Tossing It Out...Not my idea of a fun vacation.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-78538820068034746362010-08-29T07:54:09.355+10:002010-08-29T07:54:09.355+10:00Now I've got the creepy crawlies all over. Gah...Now I've got the creepy crawlies all over. Gah! Good story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-78057301267894810392010-08-29T02:37:10.053+10:002010-08-29T02:37:10.053+10:00I have to say I hated this.
Not because it was bad...I have to say I hated this.<br />Not because it was badly written, but because I have always had a ridiculous fear of such things. And now my skin is itchy. Thanks a lot. <br />lol<br />Seriously though, good entry. You obviously described it beautifully enough for me to be uncomfortable. :)Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-32742783326512977352010-08-28T22:42:06.837+10:002010-08-28T22:42:06.837+10:00Eeeps...don't want to remember this when I go ...Eeeps...don't want to remember this when I go to bed tonight!<br />Thanks for dropping by my blog and leaving a comment :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-37428739803662034382010-08-28T21:27:46.461+10:002010-08-28T21:27:46.461+10:00I was wiggling in discomfort reading this, so you ...I was wiggling in discomfort reading this, so you painted an itchy picture!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-90109062017146972962010-08-28T15:51:06.432+10:002010-08-28T15:51:06.432+10:00Elaine, Postman, Donna: Looks like the description...Elaine, Postman, Donna: Looks like the description had the desired effect. Thanks for dropping by and commenting..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-52246025461485172892010-08-28T14:53:29.324+10:002010-08-28T14:53:29.324+10:00I'll say that's descriptive! Dang, I'...I'll say that's descriptive! Dang, I'm reading this just before bed too. Maybe I should toss all the bedding in the dryer first (lol).<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-74515360241496476352010-08-28T11:26:05.155+10:002010-08-28T11:26:05.155+10:00Nice contrast between the vastness of the call to ...Nice contrast between the vastness of the call to prayer and the minor annoyances of mites. Colorful, in other words.A.T. Posthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03987529687181431843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-20260314874111547502010-08-28T09:46:42.088+10:002010-08-28T09:46:42.088+10:00The image of the critters was bad enough but when ...The image of the critters was bad enough but when "She threw back the moist covers and got to work, smacking madly, making little red smears on the greyish-white cotton." I really wished I wasn't there with her. You dragged me into that bed room kicking and screaming, your character took it all rather well! <br />Great post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-9491044392608828092010-08-28T08:13:08.688+10:002010-08-28T08:13:08.688+10:00Fleur et Fleur, loveable homebody, Pamela Jo, Fran...Fleur et Fleur, loveable homebody, Pamela Jo, Francine, L Diane Wolfe, Clarissa, Summer, Brenda, Raquel: Well, sorry for creeping y'all out, but it must have been somewhat descriptive in that case. Sorry! Itch, itch! ..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-59596904688547001412010-08-28T03:31:42.374+10:002010-08-28T03:31:42.374+10:00Bleh! I was totally creeped out...great job! The r...Bleh! I was totally creeped out...great job! The red smears on the grey cotton was a nice touch. Wonderful post.<br /><br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-72828950262982819402010-08-28T02:32:03.237+10:002010-08-28T02:32:03.237+10:00Eeew. Great itchy description. I'm officially ...Eeew. Great itchy description. I'm officially scratching everywhere. And I'm curious as to where she is (so I can mark it off my list of places to visit LOL). Nice job! :DBrenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-70192742533286384212010-08-27T23:31:50.082+10:002010-08-27T23:31:50.082+10:00Good post. i read through it pretty quickly. Thank...Good post. i read through it pretty quickly. Thanks for posting. My favorite line: "But she couldn’t stop imagining little critters crawling around in her hair like PacMan, Chomp! Chomp!" it made me itch all over LOLSummer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7044893680200477212010-08-27T23:20:51.887+10:002010-08-27T23:20:51.887+10:00Wow, that was amazing and completely gross! I had ...Wow, that was amazing and completely gross! I had to keep scratching myself while I read. But your words were painted well.<br /><br />CDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-32233733973829224872010-08-27T21:45:52.280+10:002010-08-27T21:45:52.280+10:00Thanks - I officially have the heebie-jeebies now!...Thanks - I officially have the heebie-jeebies now!L. Diane Wolfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06425864276166334896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-72693816516928858172010-08-27T19:46:17.006+10:002010-08-27T19:46:17.006+10:00Hi,
Up Now - (UK awake) - that's something a ...Hi,<br /><br />Up Now - (UK awake) - that's something a man dare not say except in private!<br /><br />OMG. I'm itching all over! <br /><br />Great scene, vividly capturing the unexpected visitors enjoying their meal, and would make for excellent TV ad for anti bed-bug spray! ;) <br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-73269546433188722932010-08-27T17:30:01.957+10:002010-08-27T17:30:01.957+10:00Now I will feel little creepy crawlys all over. I...Now I will feel little creepy crawlys all over. I think I got a couple of welts just reading this. I've got to go find the anti-itch cream now.<br />Oh and by the way very descriptive. Dang it.Theres just lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01557649636152032566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-68607110320620892702010-08-27T17:01:06.726+10:002010-08-27T17:01:06.726+10:00I like "clunk and splish." I think this ...I like "clunk and splish." I think this is onomatopoeia.Ashley Ashbeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05268928207063175136noreply@blogger.com