tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post1055253789742325603..comments2024-03-17T20:45:42.848+10:00Comments on Denise Covey: Gone in 60 Seconds - #FridayflashDenise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-72764107738867240402011-08-12T12:30:01.563+10:002011-08-12T12:30:01.563+10:00Marvelous writing, Denise! I feel like I'm sky...Marvelous writing, Denise! I feel like I'm sky diving...what a rush! & so much safer behind the computer monitor!notesfromnadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09904500676081267972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7114598124953801042011-08-11T23:00:31.672+10:002011-08-11T23:00:31.672+10:00Oh my! My heart was really pounding in the end. As...Oh my! My heart was really pounding in the end. As a mother, I could feel all her fears for her family. Truly enthralling story - wonderful job Denise!Sylvia Neyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09700149683391617521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-33740321402790323392010-07-07T17:17:56.982+10:002010-07-07T17:17:56.982+10:00Thanks Cathy. Glad you liked it. It seemed to writ...Thanks Cathy. Glad you liked it. It seemed to write itself...:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-37474559460142415502010-07-07T02:23:12.846+10:002010-07-07T02:23:12.846+10:00TOO exciting! My heart was in my throat and, as sh...TOO exciting! My heart was in my throat and, as she realized that death was surely upon her, how sad as she raced through the moments of her life.<br />The action here is so well written, you just speed along for the ride.<br />Wowsers!<br />All this and a happy ending, too!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-31236647864925980522010-06-10T06:34:04.233+10:002010-06-10T06:34:04.233+10:00Carolina, glad you enjoyed your free fall experien...Carolina, glad you enjoyed your free fall experience. You're the first to comment on her survival - it is possible, you know...)<br /><br />Talli, yes suspensful is so a word and I'm glad you used it to describe my piece...)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-79083944692486568572010-06-10T03:31:56.266+10:002010-06-10T03:31:56.266+10:00Very suspensful (is that a word? My brain has gone...Very suspensful (is that a word? My brain has gone blank!). Thanks for sharing!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7572901276574357042010-06-10T02:21:42.881+10:002010-06-10T02:21:42.881+10:00Oh my, heart pumping. What an adrenaline rush! Wel...Oh my, heart pumping. What an adrenaline rush! Well done with the portrayal of a free fall. Having never gone sky diving, this really took me into the experience. And, I must say, I'm glad she lived :)Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-36802349899756092122010-06-09T14:16:12.850+10:002010-06-09T14:16:12.850+10:00Thanks Hayley. So I didn't scare you witless t...Thanks Hayley. So I didn't scare you witless then...)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-43644468747619855952010-06-09T13:28:33.927+10:002010-06-09T13:28:33.927+10:00Not a fan of heights, so this definitely had the h...Not a fan of heights, so this definitely had the heart racing aspect down. I could never skydive, ever, way too scary but this maybe tempted me to want to, just a little. Great job this was a wonderful post, thanks for sharing.Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-7367337421260702632010-06-09T06:48:58.443+10:002010-06-09T06:48:58.443+10:00Thank you everyone for your comments. So glad you ...Thank you everyone for your comments. So glad you liked it. Helen, thanks for commenting on my new look blog, groovy. Sorry for turning some of you off sky diving altogether...)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-43458722729283551862010-06-09T00:10:13.147+10:002010-06-09T00:10:13.147+10:00I loved that bit at the end with all the sensation...I loved that bit at the end with all the sensations and thoughts crammed in on top of each other. Great job.Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-65488948122706582712010-06-08T10:54:11.975+10:002010-06-08T10:54:11.975+10:00A very kinetic piece of writing! Plus, I admire th...A very kinetic piece of writing! Plus, I admire the courage it takes to do something like this falling out of the sky business! :)notesfromnadirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09904500676081267972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-11387395715132284322010-06-08T06:57:17.530+10:002010-06-08T06:57:17.530+10:00Great stuff. Love the new look blog as well.Great stuff. Love the new look blog as well.HelenMWaltershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16182100572365505905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-54520044187096778692010-06-07T22:06:41.517+10:002010-06-07T22:06:41.517+10:00There are some really awesome lines in this piece....There are some <i>really</i> awesome lines in this piece. I love it!Abby Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06630840834227330806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-2639188726625534452010-06-07T10:22:25.711+10:002010-06-07T10:22:25.711+10:00That was great and so intense! My dad and sister j...That was great and so intense! My dad and sister just went skydiving last weekend, so I'm glad I didn't read this before then. It felt very realistic. Nice work!L. Hildhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784087836474776222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-56011695532019796362010-06-07T05:21:42.634+10:002010-06-07T05:21:42.634+10:00While I think the beginning might be too descripti...While I think the beginning might be too descriptive (I found myself skimming it a bit), I love the end! Such a strong last paragraph. Flash fiction is really hard to do, so well done on this@Sangu Mandannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464061265952789628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-79610077442935208942010-06-06T23:25:24.784+10:002010-06-06T23:25:24.784+10:00That was a really vivid piece of writing. Terrific...That was a really vivid piece of writing. Terrific!joanne foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12694158807826275846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-11861531309078453142010-06-06T10:42:32.323+10:002010-06-06T10:42:32.323+10:00Hello sarah jane. Lovely. Thanks for the follow......Hello sarah jane. Lovely. Thanks for the follow...)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-30683790288859721212010-06-06T10:26:59.417+10:002010-06-06T10:26:59.417+10:00Oh, btw, I forgot to tell you that I'm over he...Oh, btw, I forgot to tell you that I'm over here following you, too. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-53265463923494203292010-06-06T09:41:28.374+10:002010-06-06T09:41:28.374+10:00sarahjaynesmythe: Thank you for dropping by and co...sarahjaynesmythe: Thank you for dropping by and commenting...)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-11888571680635362902010-06-06T09:16:05.722+10:002010-06-06T09:16:05.722+10:00Very cool take on the blogfest. Vivid and intense....Very cool take on the blogfest. Vivid and intense. I really liked it alot. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-44616704473327287542010-06-06T08:51:40.481+10:002010-06-06T08:51:40.481+10:00Aubrie, Tessa, Francine, Christine, Misty Waters, ...Aubrie, Tessa, Francine, Christine, Misty Waters, Charity: Glad you all liked it. Yeh, I scared myself too. My daughter's been sky diving and terrifies me so I guess that's been playing on my mind.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-26153347809577152082010-06-06T03:59:50.777+10:002010-06-06T03:59:50.777+10:00Wow! That's all I can say. Wow.Wow! That's all I can say. Wow.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-40894553136665911062010-06-06T02:03:26.838+10:002010-06-06T02:03:26.838+10:00That was great!! I've never been brave enough...That was great!! I've never been brave enough to sky dive, but I feel like I just did - and now won't ever attempt in REAL life.Misty Watershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298645748620886228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7362528912516506170.post-20581252825681178102010-06-06T01:06:35.050+10:002010-06-06T01:06:35.050+10:00I found myself holding my breath as I read this.I found myself holding my breath as I read this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com